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[2024/ 3/ 23] The charts give information on the ages of people when they got married in one country in 1996 and 2008.

【主体段分段】：

方法1：一图一段

方法2：按照 <年龄> 分段

【开头段】

The bar charts compare males and females in terms of the age of getting married in one country for the year 1996 and 2008.

【概述段】

It is clear thatin both years, the majority of men and women chose to get married between 26 and 35.

思路要点：

两年中，大部分男女都在26-35岁之间结婚

【Body 1】

In 1998, only 1% of women got married between 16 and 19, andthere were no changes tothis figure until 2008.However, no men chose to start a family at this age group in these two years.In both years,more females than males decided to enter into a marriage between the ages of 20 and 30.Especially, the largest proportions of both men and women decided to get married between 26 and 30 in the initial year, with the figure of 13% and 15% respectively.Subsequently,a marginal decline by 2% could be foundin these two figures.

思路要点：左边三个年龄段

- 1998年：16-19岁的female占比1%，2008年不变

- 2年中，20-25和26-30都是 女>男

- 1998年，26-30的男女比例都最高→2008年都小幅度下降2%

【Body 2】

In terms ofthe rest age groups,we can see thatoriginally, the same percentage of men and women decided to get married between the ages of 31 and 35(13%).Afterwards, the gender gap expandedasthe figure for menwitnessed a dramatic growth to14%,whilethe proportion of womendeclined slightly by3%. In 1998, the percentage of men aged 35-40(11%)was slightly larger thanthe figure for women.Then, in 2008,the figures for both gendersexperienced a noticeable dropbutthe percentage of femalesovertooktheir male counterparts.

思路要点：右边三个年龄段

- 1998年，31-35的男女人数相同→2008年差距扩大，男生急剧上升到14%，但是女生小幅度下降了3%

- 1998年，35-40的男生轻微超过女生→2008年，两者数据明显下降，但女生反超男生