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[2023/ 8/26] The table below shows the tourist arrivals in 8 different countries between 2009 and 2010.

【主体段分段】：

方法1：按照时间分段

方法2：按照变化幅度分段(本篇文章采取此种分段方法)

【开头段】

The table compares 8 countries in terms of the number of tourists from 2009 to 2010.

【概述段】

It is clear thatChina remained to be the most popular destination among visitors in both years.Also, Germany witnessed the greatest change in tourist arrivals.

思路要点：

- China两年游客数量保持最高

- Germany变化幅度最大

【Body 1】

Looking at the information in more detail, we can see thatin the initial year, China and US

were chosen by 53 million and 52 million visitors, and these two figuresrose dramaticallyby 9.5% and 8.4% respectively in the following year.By contrast, a noticeable drop could be foundin the figure for tourists travelling to UK from 52 to 49 million, a decrease of 6%.Althoughonly 40 million people visited Germany in 2009,there emerged the sharpest growth in this figureby 11.1%.

思路要点：China, US, UK, Germany----变化量都≥6%

- China和US：从第一年的53和52million→急剧上升了9.5%和8.4%

- UK：从52million显著下降到49million，下降了6%

- Germany：2009年有40million→急剧上升了11.1%

【Body 2】

Turkey was the third country in terms of tourist arrivals in the beginning, with 46 million in 2009. The subsequent yearexperienced a slight climb inthis figure to 48.4 million, an increase of 5.3%.The given period underwent a slight rise inthe figure for tourists to Italy and Spain by roughly 1%.Besides, France was the only country where the number of visitors remained steady at 42 million.

思路要点：Turkey、Italy、Spain、France----变化量都＜6%

- Turkey：第一年排第三，46million→随后小幅度上升到48.4million，变化量为5.3%

- Italy 、Spain：小幅度上升了1%

- France：保持平稳，在42million